Oddments

In search of story

May 31.25: Thursday Doors Writing Challenge

23 Comments

In the wearing of a road

there is telling of the time,

no name, no face, no person,

but only grind and grime.

Work. It leaves the wearing,

the weight, the boot, the wheel,

the land bears the abrasion

ever slow to heal.

The comings and the goings

are now eternity

of wind that blasts all memory

to anonymity.

But there were other roads

worn deep in hand and face,

the autograph of life

lived in this hollow place.

In dust and rutty mud,

their story stark and solitary,

marker toil-engraved

in unsung cemetery.

 

 

Linked to Dan Antion’s Thursday Doors Writing Challenge,

with thanks to Katy Trail Creations for the image.

 

23 thoughts on “May 31.25: Thursday Doors Writing Challenge

  1. Dan Antion's avatar

    Such a wonderfully vivid description of the time it took to create that image. Well done, Maureen!

  2. Murphy’s Law's avatar

    Maureen, I could’ve covered the photo and I would have still seen it perfectly from your description! Time has its way with all things, doesn’t it? Ironically, we have an old farmhouse nearby that could be this one’s twin.

    Ginger 🦋

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thank you, Ginger! You are so right that time has its way with all things. There is something that demands our attention about these old empty houses, isn’t there? Maybe it’s exactly what you are saying about time, which governs us also. I love this photo. Even with its melancholy, it drew me in.

  3. robbiesinspiration's avatar

    This is a very vivid description of life for subsistence farmers

  4. Under the mask..'s avatar

    This is wonderfully deep, Maureen. Ever so evocatively so! You captured decades of life lived and labored –in just a few words. This, like much else of yours, is right up there with the likes of Seamus Heaney.🌷

  5. lois's avatar

    Oh, Maureen–this is so lovely. Makes you want to whisper, “Thank you for being here” to this old gal. Great photo, wonderful words.

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thank you, Lois! Yes, that’s much the way I felt as I looked at this. It seems anonymous and yet very personal at the same time. A beautiful photo.

  6. Judy@NewEnglandGardenAndThread's avatar

    Hate to use a pun, but ‘you nailed it.’ I always drive by a place like that and say ‘oh, the stories it could tell.’ It’s like an old barn. Some see wood and a cratering roof, while I see character and would so enjoy hearing about the families who cherished it. This was a wonderful poem. Applause to my favorite poet.

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thanks, Judy! I too wonder about the people and the times when I see places like this. They seem empty and full at the same time. As for puns, I think they rank right up there with bumper stickers and Burma Shave — and that’s a high compliment!

  7. memadtwo's avatar

    You’ve really caught the haunted mood of this photo Maureen. The stories are there, if only we could hear them. (K)

  8. Suzette Benjamin's avatar

    Your poetry is always inspiring Maureen, your ability to craft imagery that flows from line to line is amazing…

    “The comings and the goings

    are now eternity” ~ Superb.

  9. marianallen's avatar

    You are a poetic genius. I hope you know that.

  10. K. Ravindra's avatar

    This poem beautifully captures the silent, enduring marks left by labor and time—each line echoing with the quiet dignity of lives lived and forgotten. The imagery is haunting and powerful, honoring the stories etched into the very ground beneath us

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