In the wearing of a road
there is telling of the time,
no name, no face, no person,
but only grind and grime.
Work. It leaves the wearing,
the weight, the boot, the wheel,
the land bears the abrasion
ever slow to heal.
The comings and the goings
are now eternity
of wind that blasts all memory
to anonymity.
But there were other roads
worn deep in hand and face,
the autograph of life
lived in this hollow place.
In dust and rutty mud,
their story stark and solitary,
marker toil-engraved
in unsung cemetery.
Linked to Dan Antion’s Thursday Doors Writing Challenge,
with thanks to Katy Trail Creations for the image.
May 31, 2025 at 2:11 pm
Such a wonderfully vivid description of the time it took to create that image. Well done, Maureen!
May 31, 2025 at 2:39 pm
Thanks, Dan! Thanks also for hosting!
May 31, 2025 at 4:39 pm
My pleasure!
May 31, 2025 at 2:56 pm
Maureen, I could’ve covered the photo and I would have still seen it perfectly from your description! Time has its way with all things, doesn’t it? Ironically, we have an old farmhouse nearby that could be this one’s twin.
Ginger 🦋
May 31, 2025 at 3:18 pm
Thank you, Ginger! You are so right that time has its way with all things. There is something that demands our attention about these old empty houses, isn’t there? Maybe it’s exactly what you are saying about time, which governs us also. I love this photo. Even with its melancholy, it drew me in.
May 31, 2025 at 3:25 pm
This is a very vivid description of life for subsistence farmers
May 31, 2025 at 3:49 pm
Thanks, Robbie. That’s kind of what I felt here, though certainly the story could have been quite different. Nothing like a dirt road to suggest a story!
June 1, 2025 at 10:44 am
That’s true
May 31, 2025 at 3:38 pm
This is wonderfully deep, Maureen. Ever so evocatively so! You captured decades of life lived and labored –in just a few words. This, like much else of yours, is right up there with the likes of Seamus Heaney.🌷
May 31, 2025 at 3:52 pm
Thank you, Carol. I think old photos of my great-grandparents’ life in Appalachia crept into this.
May 31, 2025 at 5:14 pm
Oh, Maureen–this is so lovely. Makes you want to whisper, “Thank you for being here” to this old gal. Great photo, wonderful words.
May 31, 2025 at 5:41 pm
Thank you, Lois! Yes, that’s much the way I felt as I looked at this. It seems anonymous and yet very personal at the same time. A beautiful photo.
May 31, 2025 at 10:01 pm
Hate to use a pun, but ‘you nailed it.’ I always drive by a place like that and say ‘oh, the stories it could tell.’ It’s like an old barn. Some see wood and a cratering roof, while I see character and would so enjoy hearing about the families who cherished it. This was a wonderful poem. Applause to my favorite poet.
May 31, 2025 at 10:49 pm
Thanks, Judy! I too wonder about the people and the times when I see places like this. They seem empty and full at the same time. As for puns, I think they rank right up there with bumper stickers and Burma Shave — and that’s a high compliment!
May 31, 2025 at 11:24 pm
You’ve really caught the haunted mood of this photo Maureen. The stories are there, if only we could hear them. (K)
May 31, 2025 at 11:53 pm
Thanks, Kerfe. Yes, “if only.”
June 1, 2025 at 1:53 pm
Your poetry is always inspiring Maureen, your ability to craft imagery that flows from line to line is amazing…
“The comings and the goings
are now eternity” ~ Superb.
June 1, 2025 at 3:32 pm
Thank you, Suzette. This image seemed full of voices, but maybe it was just the wind.
June 1, 2025 at 3:45 pm
There are images, I feel, that speak volumes in some way!
Have a wonderful Sunday, Maureen.
June 2, 2025 at 12:35 pm
You are a poetic genius. I hope you know that.
June 2, 2025 at 12:38 pm
Thanks, Marian! It’s a nice thought!
June 22, 2025 at 1:37 pm
This poem beautifully captures the silent, enduring marks left by labor and time—each line echoing with the quiet dignity of lives lived and forgotten. The imagery is haunting and powerful, honoring the stories etched into the very ground beneath us
June 23, 2025 at 9:57 am
“Etched in the ground” — exactly. Thank you for your comment.