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May 28.25: Thursday Doors Writing Challenge

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Tweet and Twang, that musical twosome,

plucked and chirruped night and noonsome.

The gig was good if slightly chilly,

and Tweet’s grace notes were most untrilly.

Twang turned to Tweet: “You’re sounding gruesome.”

 

“Push in!” Twang grumbled, “Your flute is flat!

I’ve perfect pitch — you know that!”

Unflappable Tweet, calm, demure,

never changing his embouchure,

was wishing for a coat and hat.

 

 

Linked to Dan Antion’s Thursday Doors Writing Challenge,

with thanks to bushboy, aka Brian Dodd, for the image.

 

18 thoughts on “May 28.25: Thursday Doors Writing Challenge

  1. Suzette Benjamin's avatar

    Well done Maureen. I love the witty exchange between tweet and twang and your use of fabulous words (embouchure) to describe the playing of instruments. Great fresh take on this door and its “guardian” musicans.

  2. Murphy’s Law's avatar

    Perfect Maureen. Yeah, I’m thinking both Tweet and Twang are a bit chilly! I hope on their next gig they get better seating arrangements!

    Ginger 🦋

  3. lois's avatar

    Hilarious and wonderful, Maureen. When there are no spectators, I could picture Tweet and Twang having this conversation.

    • Oddment's avatar

      I really have an urge to put hoodies on them to warm them up! And, yes, it’s easy to imagine what they say to each other (about US) when they’re alone!

  4. Judy@NewEnglandGardenAndThread's avatar

    Handsome photo with lovely words. I have to admit, as I scrolled down and saw those shrubs, that’s all I could concentrate on for a minute while thinking about how they trimmed them. Then I went back and read for a second time so I could fully appreciate the banter. 🙂

    • Oddment's avatar

      Ah, the gardener’s eye — it’s always working! Yes, those are some handsome specimens. Actually, it’s a cool door picture, but then the parts of it kind of break out — like musicians and formal shrubbery. Thanks, Judy!

  5. memadtwo's avatar

    I imagine it could get a little chilly…and I’m sure they have their banter and music to a formula after all those years guarding the door. (K)

  6. Dan Antion's avatar

    This was so much fun, Maureen. I love the conversation. I hope someone wraps them up at night. Congratulations, this is our 60th entry.

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