Oddments

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May 24.25: Thursday Doors Writing Challenge

23 Comments

Stop.

Look at me.

Don’t pass by

obliviously.

My crooked eye,

pocked complexion

deserve more than

your inattention.

I came to be

in precision birth

to fit exactly

this bit of Earth.

In simultaneous

up and down

I meld to hill

and to the town.

My bolted doors

in shadows belie

the turret dream

naysayers deny,

insisting my turret

is too near ground

to have a dream —

it’s doomed, earth-bound.

It may be short

as turrets go,

but dreams don’t need

a Chenonceau;

dreams and commerce,

yesterday

came and went —

they could not stay.

But I’m still here,

more or less,

proudly peculiar

anomalousness.

 

 

Linked to Dan Antion’s Thursday Doors Writing Challenge.

with thanks to Dan for the photo.

 

23 thoughts on “May 24.25: Thursday Doors Writing Challenge

  1. Murphy’s Law's avatar

    Maureen, this is fabulous! That’s exactly what that house would say if it could talk. Wait a minute, by any chance did this house dictate this post to you? Hmmmm, methinks it’s not just her eye that’s crooked! Well done.

    Enjoy the holiday weekend and the official start of summer. Summer? It’s cold, rainy, and windy here!

    Ginger🦋

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thanks, Ginger! Yes, this house dictated. As did that stop sign. They combined together so well! As for summer, HA. It’s been so cold here that I’ve had to turn on the furnace again. Flannels out! I believe we might warm up a bit today, and my old bones would be most grateful if that happens. I hope you enjoy the weekend too!

  2. lois's avatar

    I love this! Oh, I want to walk around and peek in the windows–what a fabulous old building. Proudly peculiar and standing tall, in my eyes. Lovely, Maureen.

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thanks, Lois! I’m with you on that: I want to peek in all those windows, and I also want to go in. I wonder if it will ever be restored. It wouldn’t have much of a view, but it sure would have stories!

  3. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar

    Maureen, this is a delight. I love that you wrote from the point of view of the building, and “proudly peculiar” is a fabulous turn of phrase. Hugs.

  4. robbiesinspiration's avatar

    I enjoyed this poem very much, Maureen

  5. memadtwo's avatar

    “Proudly peculiar”–I like the hopefulness in that assessment. (K)

  6. Miriam Hurdle's avatar

    Lovely poem, Maureen! This peculiar place has no competition.

  7. Judy@NewEnglandGardenAndThread's avatar

    When I was a young child, an uncle and aunt lived in an apartment in a building on a corner similar to this one. I always loved sitting in the front window and looking out. Your words are beautiful, and they brought a wonderful memory and a smile. Thank you for it all. Good way to start the day.

  8. Dan Antion's avatar

    This is wonderful, Maureen. I so wanted to write something to go with that photo, but I couldn’t come up with an idea. You nailed it! Let the building tel its own story. You told it very well. Thanks for giving this photo a shot.

  9. Suzette Benjamin's avatar

    Absolutely outstanding! Maureen, you captured superbly the vibes and sentiments I feel when looking at this building. What a great word, “Chenonceau.”

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