Stop.
Look at me.
Don’t pass by
obliviously.
My crooked eye,
pocked complexion
deserve more than
your inattention.
I came to be
in precision birth
to fit exactly
this bit of Earth.
In simultaneous
up and down
I meld to hill
and to the town.
My bolted doors
in shadows belie
the turret dream
naysayers deny,
insisting my turret
is too near ground
to have a dream —
it’s doomed, earth-bound.
It may be short
as turrets go,
but dreams don’t need
a Chenonceau;
dreams and commerce,
yesterday
came and went —
they could not stay.
But I’m still here,
more or less,
proudly peculiar
anomalousness.
Linked to Dan Antion’s Thursday Doors Writing Challenge.
with thanks to Dan for the photo.
May 24, 2025 at 1:16 pm
Maureen, this is fabulous! That’s exactly what that house would say if it could talk. Wait a minute, by any chance did this house dictate this post to you? Hmmmm, methinks it’s not just her eye that’s crooked! Well done.
Enjoy the holiday weekend and the official start of summer. Summer? It’s cold, rainy, and windy here!
Ginger🦋
May 24, 2025 at 2:10 pm
Thanks, Ginger! Yes, this house dictated. As did that stop sign. They combined together so well! As for summer, HA. It’s been so cold here that I’ve had to turn on the furnace again. Flannels out! I believe we might warm up a bit today, and my old bones would be most grateful if that happens. I hope you enjoy the weekend too!
May 24, 2025 at 1:38 pm
I love this! Oh, I want to walk around and peek in the windows–what a fabulous old building. Proudly peculiar and standing tall, in my eyes. Lovely, Maureen.
May 24, 2025 at 2:12 pm
Thanks, Lois! I’m with you on that: I want to peek in all those windows, and I also want to go in. I wonder if it will ever be restored. It wouldn’t have much of a view, but it sure would have stories!
May 24, 2025 at 5:10 pm
Maureen, this is a delight. I love that you wrote from the point of view of the building, and “proudly peculiar” is a fabulous turn of phrase. Hugs.
May 24, 2025 at 5:27 pm
Thanks, Teagan! This place really captivated me.
May 24, 2025 at 7:09 pm
I enjoyed this poem very much, Maureen
May 24, 2025 at 7:55 pm
Thanks, Robbie!
May 25, 2025 at 12:24 am
“Proudly peculiar”–I like the hopefulness in that assessment. (K)
May 25, 2025 at 1:12 am
Thanks, Kerfe. I really like this old run-down place. Maybe writers lean toward the peculiar!
May 25, 2025 at 12:12 pm
I do too. The location could be better though.
May 25, 2025 at 2:53 am
Lovely poem, Maureen! This peculiar place has no competition.
May 25, 2025 at 11:40 am
Thank you, Miriam! I agree: it has no competition. What a great little building!
May 25, 2025 at 10:32 am
When I was a young child, an uncle and aunt lived in an apartment in a building on a corner similar to this one. I always loved sitting in the front window and looking out. Your words are beautiful, and they brought a wonderful memory and a smile. Thank you for it all. Good way to start the day.
May 25, 2025 at 11:39 am
Thanks, Judy. What a great look-out place that must have been for a child! Sometimes we go back to such places in our heads, yes?
May 25, 2025 at 3:44 pm
This is wonderful, Maureen. I so wanted to write something to go with that photo, but I couldn’t come up with an idea. You nailed it! Let the building tel its own story. You told it very well. Thanks for giving this photo a shot.
May 25, 2025 at 5:53 pm
Thanks, Dan — I’m glad you approve, and I’m glad you got the photo. That’s a great old place.
May 25, 2025 at 9:07 pm
My brother was driving at the time. He stopped and said, “I know you’re going to want a picture of that!”
May 25, 2025 at 10:29 pm
The Stop. It’s everything! Hoorar for your brother — he knew!
May 26, 2025 at 10:34 am
Absolutely outstanding! Maureen, you captured superbly the vibes and sentiments I feel when looking at this building. What a great word, “Chenonceau.”
May 26, 2025 at 10:52 am
Thanks, Suzette! I think this little building is just wonderful, and it’s easy to imagine what it might be if someone gave it some TLC — well, a lot of TLC! I totally agree about “Chenonceau”: a great word!
May 26, 2025 at 11:59 am
Great work Maureen!
May 26, 2025 at 12:43 pm
Thank you!