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May 31.24 (two today): Coping, but barely

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Unniversity building from early 1900s Asymmetrical stone buildnig. Large 3-story center structure with a 2-story addition on the left and a open bell tower rising higher than the building on the right. There are about 30 steps leading up to the main entrance.Up

 

Up is a good place

though you can’t always see it;

still it’s undeniable

that you can often be it.

Up is somewhere better;

how ever up you are,

there’s always somewhere upper

than the place in which you are.

Speaking for myself,

I’d like an elevator;

a simple push of button,

and sooner rather than later.

Up could be so reachable

if I could hitch a ride,

I wouldn’t be wheezing and gasping,

and clutching the stitch in my side.

But the lesson I have learned

from that old taskmaster Time:

if you want to get to Up,

you’re going to have to climb.

 

 

With thanks to Dan Antion for the photo

and for hosting the

Thursday Doors Writing Challenge.

My muse and I have had a great time;

we’re indebted to the door donors and to you, Dan!

 

21 thoughts on “May 31.24 (two today): Coping, but barely

  1. Dan Antion's avatar

    You and your muse had a marvelous run, Maureen and you ended on an up note (sorry, I couldn’t resist). I like this a lot, and with the hills in West Virginia, up was always a challenge.

    Thanks so much for joining us and sharing your talent and spirit throughout the month.

  2. lois's avatar

    You and your muse are a wonder, Maureen! Great job on all the doors you have written about. You are someone I definitely look up to. You know the ‘up’ jokes are going to keep on coming….!

  3. Suzette Benjamin's avatar

    What a delightful piece, Maureen. This made me smile.

  4. Judy@NewEnglandGardenAndThread's avatar

    This ‘up’ reminded me of my trip to a local furniture store this week. I climbed this huge staircase to get upstairs only to have to go back up because the salesperson and I weren’t in sync about my choice. It is an old historic building, but I told him they needed a lift of some sort for us old folks who still shop local. 🙂

  5. Murphy's Law's avatar

    Maureen, you and your muse need to take a bow and revel in the applause for another job well done. The door entries really got you ‘up’ and running. Don’t you go getting all uppity on us now just because you could write about a paper bag and we’d be hanging on to every word!

    Thanks for sharing this. You made my mood brighten up tenfold.

    Ginger

  6. memadtwo's avatar

    A lesson we all must learn sooner or later! Much as we might desire it, Scotty is not going to beam us up. (K)

  7. 100 Country Trek's avatar

    Thanks for sharing this an amazing image. Anita

  8. marianallen's avatar

    Super! I love it, as always!

  9. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar

    Ha! I’m with you about the elevator. Thanks for another great poem. Hugs.

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