The rickety door
The rickety door,
brave old thing,
ancient soldier
splintering.
Sentry faithful,
straight, alone,
pledge and promise
sealed in stone.
Arched and crowned
in Gothic grace,
no option but
to age in place.
Creaking, popping,
rust embossed,
rheumatic squeaks
in echo tossed.
Door-in-door,
casual plumb,
witness to herald,
hoof and drum.
And now, time-sanded,
gapped and grey,
in rasping crick
it seems to say,
“Admit it.
You would love to see
what’s on the
other side of me.
But I’m the keeper,
you can’t see more;
I have my secrets.
I’m the rickety door.”
With thanks to photographer Brian (“Bushboy”),
submitted to Dan Antion’s
May 9, 2024 at 10:42 am
Applause for your word skills. I really like this one, but maybe that’s because some of your words apply to how I feel some days. 🙂 Happy Thursday.
May 9, 2024 at 10:43 am
Thanks, Judy! Yes, I too felt a kinship with this door. Happy Thursday to you too!
May 9, 2024 at 12:42 pm
This is wonderful, Maureen. What’s that?! I think the door creaked open just a tad to let you in!
May 9, 2024 at 1:05 pm
Whoa! If you follow close behind, maybe you can sneak in too!
May 9, 2024 at 12:54 pm
Maureen, Brian’s door is awesome, but your poem makes it come alive. Fantastic job! I hate to admit it, but my rickety body can definitely relate to this rickety door. Sigh….
Ginger🦋
May 9, 2024 at 1:08 pm
Thanks, Ginger. I too felt that I understood a little of the rickety door, but I know others have more limitations than I do. I am sorry you are rickety; it gets in the way.
May 9, 2024 at 3:32 pm
As a fellow old rickety door with secrets – thank you for the sweet start to my day!
May 9, 2024 at 3:46 pm
Well said! Thank you!
May 9, 2024 at 10:49 pm
The doors knows more than we give it credit for, Maureen. Impressive that you could see that.
“no option but to age in place.” I resemble that line.
May 10, 2024 at 12:28 am
Harhar.
May 10, 2024 at 3:58 am
This is lovely! I really felt you found the doors-(s) voice.
May 10, 2024 at 8:21 am
Thanks! That’s a nice thought!
May 10, 2024 at 11:38 pm
You’re welcome!
May 11, 2024 at 12:59 am
Well done, Maureen! I enjoyed this a lot. Hugs.
May 11, 2024 at 1:35 am
Thanks, Teagan!
May 16, 2024 at 3:35 am
“Creaking … rheumatic squeaks” sounds familiar. Haha. You weave your words so creatively!
May 16, 2024 at 9:13 am
Thanks, Brenda! I have firsthand knowledge of those squeaks and creaks!
May 22, 2024 at 4:32 pm
Love this one 🙂
May 22, 2024 at 7:39 pm
There was a bit of the personal in this! Thanks!
May 25, 2024 at 7:22 pm
Beautifully done! I think you did a great job of implying human aging while making the poem unquestionably about the door. That’s a slick trick to pull off, and you made it seem effortless.
May 25, 2024 at 8:15 pm
Thanks, Marian! Aging is never far from my thoughts! I seem to have one or two things in common with things that creak.