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May 5.24: Coping, but barely

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The trees far away

turn to blue,

dissolving into the sky,

hinting of things new.

But there are slippers at the door.

The air rolls on forever,

wanting to be breathed,

a world in wondering

unknowns wreathed.

But there are slippers at the door.

Tail-twitch of squirrel

throws down the glove;

wobble of rabbit ear,

coo of the dove

beckon like fireflies,

here but then not,

threshold moment,

indecision-fraught.

Because there are slippers at the door.

Isn’t it inner-dwelt,

a creeping unstilled fear:

if I seek that open world,

will the slippers still be here?

 

Submitted by photographer S.W. Berg

and me

to Dan Antion’s

Thursday Doors Writing Challenge.

(Dan, did I do this right?)

 

16 thoughts on “May 5.24: Coping, but barely

  1. marina's avatar

    Lovely!!! (pat the doggie for me) 🙂

  2. Judy Garst Schramm's avatar

    Very good. Always a dilemma: shall I go or should I stay?

  3. Murphy's Law's avatar

    Maureen, your poem and photo are both a work of art. This sweet girl knows those slippers mean her person is nearby. The view from the glass door is extremely inviting, but will those slippers still be there when she gets back? I think she’s looking back to see if her person is coming to put on those slippers.

    I just love this. Thank you for sharing.

    Ginger🦋

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thank you, Ginger! Bill has sent many outstanding photos; this is one of my favorites. It’s such a poignant contrast between the world outside and the world inside, with the dog the perfect in-between!

  4. robbiesinspiration's avatar

    This is a most interesting thought. I like this poem very much.

  5. Judy@NewEnglandGardenAndThread's avatar

    Nice, Maureen. 🙂 Whenever I see a dog or cat sitting at a storm door looking out I wonder what is going through their head, and I’m guessing you covered it right here.

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thanks, Judy! I often wonder what’s going through a dog’s or cat’s head no matter where they are. Maybe they are wondering what’s going through MY head! (Sometimes I wonder too.)

  6. JT Twissel's avatar

    Nicely done – I know the feeling and the photo is a perfect companion to your words.

  7. Dan Antion's avatar

    You certainly did, Maureen. I’ll add this to the page today, and I love this poem. I always wondered what our dogs were thinking when they stared out into the yard. We had four, and they all reacted differently to the world beyond the window, but they mostly reacted the same to the people wearing the slippers. I don’t think any would have traded one for the other, but Maddie always wanted her humans to go outside and sit with her. Lovely poem – great photo – well done!

    • Oddment's avatar

      Thanks, Dan! Dogs do seem to have a way of making us wonder what they’re thinking. And they do have quite the attachment to the ones who wear the slippers.

  8. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar

    This is so full of love, Maureen. Well done. Hugs.

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