Marigolds at twilight
border of hot coals
fevered daytime’s embers
garden’s molten shoals.
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Marigolds at twilight
border of hot coals
fevered daytime’s embers
garden’s molten shoals.
July 21, 2017 at 6:02 pm
I received ‘today’s’ post in email but it won’t link back. Please, I want to comment. 🙂
July 21, 2017 at 6:07 pm
Oh, I’m sorry! I took it down. I was afraid that it was going to be misunderstood as some kind of religious message, and I didn’t intend that at all. If I can think of a way to re-do it, I will!
July 21, 2017 at 6:36 pm
🙂 I wanted to comment that it is always a better lidea to put the phone down and look up. I didn’t take it as religious but more as a social comment. 🙂
July 22, 2017 at 12:29 pm
Yes, you got what I was trying to say. I suppose it wouldn’t have been a big deal to be misunderstood — sometimes writers aren’t clear enough and sometimes readers aren’t clear enough — but it troubled me that I might be coming across as some self-righteous blatherer. I may be a blatherer, but I am self-righteous only in matters of dark chocolate and homemade cookies.