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Connections: January 19

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SANYO DIGITAL CAMERASnow on sticks

soft yet stark

my garden’s reduced

to a bony park

the white melts away

and all that’s left

are skeletal ruins

of softness bereft.

Connections

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2 thoughts on “Connections: January 19

  1. That last perfect word, “bereft.” Took my breath away.

  2. Thank you. It’s such a great feeling when another writer responds to word choice!

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